Somewhere in time (out of breaths)

Somewhere in time (out of breaths)

A Poem by Light




 

There is a twilight;

springs within me,

taking me before time,

unfolding me to the afterglow.

 

Higher, farther my Soul 

fading like a whisper.

~I yearned Your palms, I aspired Your love

how She emerges

from Thy golden bond;

while heaven's winding earth

with venerable tranquility.

I've adored You from then,

when I saw Your soul, nude

lusty…  

vital there.

birthing out life.

 

life flows …

and life wallows…

hushed by noises,

Your voice vulnerable and weak. 

~ripped my heart, ripped my Soul,

I should have known,

my task will be ending soon.~

 

forgive but never forget …

 

Thus~ somewhere in time,

when I'm out of breaths,

may his Soul be saved

even if not by my hands.


and let it all burn inside me,


how much he knew of me

how much he knew of my love.





©  Gh~*

8.Nov.2018 

© 2018 Light


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I like the maturity of this, so many times we see the love, lust and relationship writing that is either too depressed and desperate or on the other end angry and undignified. This carries a healthy look at that part of a relationship and comes looking hopeful and moderate. Great piece of writing, I loved it!

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You've captured something deep here, never easy to do what You say, sometimes when the pain speaks, .. read more



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Simply beautiful in an exotic way. Your lines seem to float gently through each stanza and it is so beautiful how you do that. Thank you for sharing this.

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the thanks go to You my friend for taking the time to read another piece of me with Your kindness,I .. read more
I have been waiting for these words to arrive & they shall satisfy my hunger for a while... shh... I am hushed by noises...he whispers thank you.. N

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Neville

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ha.. well worth the wait tho my friend... N
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aren't You too kind my friend...
Neville

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I like the maturity of this, so many times we see the love, lust and relationship writing that is either too depressed and desperate or on the other end angry and undignified. This carries a healthy look at that part of a relationship and comes looking hopeful and moderate. Great piece of writing, I loved it!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

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You've captured something deep here, never easy to do what You say, sometimes when the pain speaks, .. read more

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