the breath

the breath

A Poem by lightsong
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injured and beloved.

"
full is my breath

  my heart lies through the branches

  invisible and sound 

  endless. it is the spirit of air. 


 * heartbreak one, I crawled up 

   heartbreak two, I raised over the peak

   heartbreak unknown... the time to realize

   nothing is wrong within;

   it's the earthly world.


   heartbreath one, I curve the mountain

   heartbreath two, I stir the founts

   heartbreath unknown, there is no place 

   nor "you"

   who can claim my worth.*


 flowing the sunrise

  the twilight

  the rain the breeze

  the musk scent,

  I am still the breath

  not to you, nor to them

  but to skies and Gods

  nature and heaven,

  love me up as me

  a holy power

  I; their coded muse.


  red are my lips

  injured by mortals

  wounded is my soul

  still crystal,

  arose like life's essence

  on dewed petals
  of the early chilling snow

  where I still see

  my birth,

  my death,

  my eternity.



©  Gh

3.Nov.2021

© 2021 lightsong


Author's Note

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This feels like such a beautiful, perfect, light poem! It’s so fluttery, happy, kind and angelic. All the words you used were perfect. This is an outstanding piece, truly heartwarming and perfect for this time of year. Each word of this poem hits differently, giving the reader such intense emotions, but step away from this piece with an amazing experience. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

So much kindness, beauty, care and thoughtfulness You've bestowed upon me and my page, how wonderful.. read more



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It's hard to be discovered (breath)
It's hard to be loved (Breath)
It's hard to breath,
I love the song, and your words,
great read, dear, :D Maynard

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Month Ago

Once again many sincere thanks dear Maynard for your kindness. May love always shines on You~
knighngale

4 Weeks Ago

your most welcome dear, you are a great poet, and writer, exquisite 😁😋
Lovely poem and art work.
So interesting..the way you use words..
Very emotional read..
I went back just now to reread your poem..loved it...
Lisa

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Months Ago

No, I did not get a notification of that..so I will go now to see.. Thank you so much!!
lightsong

2 Months Ago

Yes, the site can do this sometimes :> You can check your newsfeed to see what's new for You,I think.. read more
Lisasview

2 Months Ago

Oh, okay..still getting the hang of all this..
Glad to be on Friends..
Lisa
This is a powerful write, very vision full and moving. But, yet it left me wondering. About what, I don't know for sure (?).

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Months Ago

:> Good morning my friend, I understand the (about what question) I am aware how my poems can be co.. read more
JE Falcon

3 Months Ago

Thanks again, but I guess that I was taking this too far. What you explained I got. But some lines m.. read more
lightsong

3 Months Ago

I am sorry to have confused You my friend, I actually like clarity too but I don't seem to bring it .. read more
What a beautiful concept 'heartbreath'! I really like your threeplay in this poem. Its beautiful! I was looking for the asterisk at the bottom? Explaining the claiming of your worth?

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Months Ago

and Ghounwah* is BACK ;> I like playing and being naughty sometimes lol and I bet You do too Mr. Bil.. read more
but to skies and Gods
nature and heaven,
love me up as me
a holy power
I; their coded muse.

VERY awesome, This is so amazing,
I think you are talented.
So beautiful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

4 Months Ago

:> and You leave me with a big smile~ beautiful and generous of You my friend. I am warmly thankful .. read more
How lovely and uplifting; your words seem like gossamer seeds of dandelion escaping on the breeze. Thank you for sharing the lovely poetry. Blessings for a happy, safe and prosperous New Year. F.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

"like gossamer seeds of dandelion escaping on the breeze" How gorgeous is that? now it's under my po.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

5 Months Ago

You need not "steal" anything from my comment. I offer it freely as my gift to you with my honest wo.. read more
lightsong

5 Months Ago

and THANK YOU :> have to admit that sometimes my friends leave me these really beautiful words which.. read more
This feels like such a beautiful, perfect, light poem! It’s so fluttery, happy, kind and angelic. All the words you used were perfect. This is an outstanding piece, truly heartwarming and perfect for this time of year. Each word of this poem hits differently, giving the reader such intense emotions, but step away from this piece with an amazing experience. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

So much kindness, beauty, care and thoughtfulness You've bestowed upon me and my page, how wonderful.. read more

the first time I read these words, I read each one of them in awe .. they made me feel clean, light and free .. and I noted that when I moved on, my mouth gave a little sigh and made a gentle almost imperceptible sound that would be impossible to even contemplate spelling ... but was evidently associated with that very own breath of mine exhaled ........... I have since re-visited many times and am sure to again ...... yours truly a BIG fan ... Me :)


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

now there is a BIG smile on my face 😊
Neville

5 Months Ago


.. it seems our smiles go on for miles .......❤️ 😊
lightsong

5 Months Ago

and it is so good ❤️😊
' I am still the breath - not to you, nor to them - but to skies and Gods - nature and heaven,..'
Your words come from a very different place, dear luv. They touch spirit and heart in a way very few other poets can For me tis the honest sincerity in every sentence. Spiritual. Magical. More.
Thank you for sending me out on a busy day in a near calm and smiling way, Keep safe. Please. x

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

I hope your day turned to be magical as the magic "You" Miss Fairy sparkled over my page, sweet and .. read more

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~ let that voice inside me be silent by the beauty of my higher truth~ *may my inspiration end not on my deathbed but when words become flowers and air becomes fragrance, the world is beautif.. more..

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