The Land of the Desperate Souls

The Land of the Desperate Souls

A Poem by R_Denommee394
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This is basically my version of Hell... Real happy, isn't it?

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                                The Land of the Desperate Souls
                                       Lower your head
                                       Look down at your feet
                                       You've entered Death's hands
                                       Your heart no longer beats
                                       You try to cry
                                       But you've been sucked into a black hole
                                       Into the Land of the Desperate Souls.

                                        Empty eyes hungrily search you
                                        Boney hands beg you for food
                                       Not lemons, nor crackers, nor pizza, nor pie
                                       Nobody eats when they die.
                                       They want your youth, your spirit, your light
                                       That brightens the sky in this forever night
                                               You've sinned
                                               They win
                                        You must pay your tolls
                                        And live in the Land of the Desperate Souls

                                      Women and children
                                       Men and pets
                                       Doctors and lawyers
                                        Teachers and vets
                                       They surround you and swarm you
                                       Like angry bees
                                       No fire to warm you
                                       No one to set you free
                                       There is no daytime
                                        Only night so cold
                                      It's depressing here in the land of the Desperate Souls.

                                     So lower your head
                                     Look down at your feet
                                     You're in Death's hands
                                     Your heart will never beat
                                     Don't try to cry
                                     The black hole has closed
                                     You're forever stuck
                                     In the Land of the Desperate Souls.

© 2012 R_Denommee394


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R_Denommee394

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Hello! My name is Rose and I just ADORE writing! I'm 13 and fantasy is my life! Harry Potter has inspired me to put my hobby to work, so one day I can fulfill my dream of becoming an author. And .. more..

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