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A Poem by Little Miss

Pushed past the point of breaking

You`re barely able to stand

You are surrounded by people, but have never felt so alone

Your heart has been blackened

You build your walls you keep people from getting inside

From getting close enough to hurt you

Fake smiles and laughter mask your pain

But I can see right through you

I see straight through that mask you wear on your face

You may feel alone and cold

But I will stay with you and give you a warm hand to hold

And I`ll teach you how to love

And put the light back in your deep chocolate brown eyes

© 2011 Little Miss


Author's Note

Little Miss
I had no idea what to title it:P lmao

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Thankyou PyroKitty24:)
I fixed the random spelling errors:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


decent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it definitely needs proofread. But I liked the idea. It was pretty~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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