Perfect to Horrible

I thought it was me and you forever in a Fairy Tale,

rainbows and casles,

nothing like reality,

but then my nightmare came,

I lost my prince charming,

in a feild of bloody knifes,

but only one was clean,

and it had my name written on the side...

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

A conceited Sybil Vane from Oscar Wilde? Or a virgin knife in a blood-bath? Eventually, sounds lovely. Good work!

[livinglifeloud]

I really like this. Its very creepy yet sad, falling in love with someone only to lose them.