Fantasy

written November 16, 2012

All day I think of you

But do you think of me

I’m scared to say how I feel

Due to the fact

That you’re you

And I’m me

 

I see you

I smile

You look

But no reaction

 

Who am I to you

Because you’re everything to me

 

Someday you will be more than a dream

More than a person

More than a love

Someday you will be mine

But until then I’m no one to you

 

So I go back to my dreams

So that I can be with you

Because us in real life is just a fantasy 

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

Who am I to you
Because you’re everything to me

Everyone's been there, this is another very relatable piece, I'm amazed by how well you exibited these ideas, especially the afore stated. Feeling so strongly for someone and getting but a momentary glance in return. Well done.

[Radacach]

thank you so much for all your feed back its great! yeah those momentary glances are the worst!
read morethank you so much for all your feed back its great! yeah those momentary glances are the worst!

[Annabelle Lee]

I remember those first few reviews toward the beginning were always the most important to me, glad I could be of some assistance

[Lily Victoria]

This reflects on how I feel sometimes! It's a great poem! Good job!

[Kupendwa]

Fabulous poem. I remember when you first wrote it. I think I've come to appreciate it even more as time has gone on. Seriously, it's so well written.

[Fish]

This is so sad but so great. :/ Everyone can relate to this feeling, it's so sad but you put it into beautiful words.
Fantastic poem ^_^

[Radacach]

Yeah almost everyone has felt this way before...and aw thanks it means a lot to me that you like my work since your work is truly amazing!!

[Fish]

XD blahh that's so nice, but your work is equally, if anything, more amazing. You write about relatable, everyday topics and make them beautiful with a new perspective, I love them :3

[Radacach]

Aw well thank you very much! I'm glad you find my work relatable !!

[LouisianaBird]

This poem really speaks to me! I read this poem, and your words are so relevant. Very well done (:

[Radacach]

Aw thank you:) and I'm glad it really speaks to you:)!