A Land of Bliss

Happier than Halloween

So excited, a rainbow so often stops to scream

So serene, yet happily chaotic

And the light is so joyous, that it effects the optics

The ageless trees wave a faint hello

The lions here, only charge to kiss and play

There is an absence of black, only a lighter shade of gray

And the clouds can be walked on, during a foggy day

Nobody attacks, only the occasional wisecrack

There isn't a soul here, that isn't willing

And lightning is replaced, by blueberry filling

Aggression or depression, are unknown like killing

The fish talk, and the roads are made of chalk

And sometimes when the mood is bored, He'll come down for a walk

Marshmallow hail, and free houses for sale

And you never take leave, because here, nobody fails.

Reviews

[Murtuza]

This has a nice melodic tune to it, in my perspective. This is a light and endearing piece and has an positive and up-beat outlook.

"The fish talk, and the roads are made of chalk
And sometimes when the mood is bored, He'll come down for a walk
Marshmallow hail, and free houses for sale
And you never take leave, because here, nobody fails."

- My favourite lines :)
This is a wonderful poem and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing and keep the ink flowing! :D