True Love

What love is (:

The Darkened hours of life have passed,
And have me a feeling given,
That life till now was really hard,
But coz you're here with me, I'm living
The love that I do feel for you,
Is too much to compare,
How do you make me feel this way?
Mo love, it's just not fair,
Your eyes are like two clear pools,
In which myself I see,
And if for love I'd have to die,
Then for you, my love, it'd be,
Your love, the only reason why,
My life has times of laughter,
And I hope my love, that our story too,
Has a happy ever after,
I love you now and forever will,
Even if you love me not,
And these moments of life, I'll always cherish,
Even if only pain I got.

Reviews

[EternityWolf101]

Brilliantly told. The entire piece just fits together perfectly. I can't wait to read more of your work when I get the time. Nice job.

[MusicJunkie]

This is really good. I like the last three lines.