Deadly life

Deadly life

A Poem by Mohamed Rahim Iqbal

About absence of girl in his life

Every morning is coming
I tried to stop my bad dreams
It struggling me to live
I'm away with you

You must have to be free
And Im away and I'm away
Because you no more
In my life get stucked.

Days are passing on the time
And I'm getting slow in my life
Need to more love to see you.
Even I don't know how to do.

I kept the flowers on your side
It's got faded on my sight
Every moment I feel you
I'm alone in our life

© 2017 Mohamed Rahim Iqbal

Author's Note

Mohamed Rahim Iqbal
Expecting good

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Interpreted as I think you wanted it to speak. Needs a bit of cleaning up edit wise.

Lovingly abandoned, dreadfully sorrow

Great Read


Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on November 4, 2017
Last Updated on November 4, 2017
Tags: Love, life, marriage, fight


Mohamed Rahim Iqbal
Mohamed Rahim Iqbal

Chennai , Asian, India

Hi, I'm an engineer. It's my pain and also a timepass. So if you like my story or poetry pls don't forgot to review and if anything to share or any mistake please contact me ig(lone_wolf_rahii). Thank.. more..