Spring Haiku X

Haiku

 

smoky blue twilight

wind teasing the tall grasses

the sound of rain sticks

Author's Note

Review as you will.

Reviews

[Graybeard]

Great imagery here...it's hard to "paint the picture" with such a restrictive form and so few words...which is why I love haiku :) I like the alliteration in line 2 and the last image, rain sticks, is pretty cool. I imagine sticks of rain, not rain sticking