Lakeside Suicide

 

 

Are you ready for this?

 

Cause I have been for a long time, now i'm sitting here

 

And I hold this rope

 

 

Now i'm ready to go

 

But your not here to get me through this

 

Because it's my Lakeside Suicide

 

 

You told me that you loved me

 

I used to believe it

 

And now I can't believe a word you say

 

 

I sit here right where we met

 

And I can planly see that your not

 

your too busy with everyone else

 

I thought you cared, Now I don't know what to think any longer

 

 

It will be all over soon

 

are you sure you can handle this Lakeside Suicide....

 

Reviews

A catchy title. I would have liked to see more detail- perhaps you should elaborate on why it would be a 'lakeside' suicide. Watch out for cliches.
Still, I rather like where you're going with this.

And now I'll resort to the paranoid part of me- you're okay, right?

[Jade (insanity)]

I liked it...though it was really sad. I hope things are or get better. ^-^