Quiet Places

Quiet Places

A Poem by Eager to Learn
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A place that brought me peace, and it is now being destroyed

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A place, nestled in the corner of my home
A place, with wonders forbidden to me
Skeletons of my families legacy buried
ivory frames that gift me the marrow from their past
A place, regarded to "dangerous" for a child
A place, deemed " Privileged" and not for my eyes
The dark of this room, the sepulture for dead memories
Giving me light and life in my musings.
A place, My sanctuary, in which I gladly locked myself
A place, sut off from the living world below 
My mind keeping me in the void
in silence transforming into my Claude Frollo
A place, that is now in jeopardy
A place, I'm helping to destroy.
the tables are to be cleared
and the contents to be burned 
A place, I can't leave behind
A place, that holds so much power on me
It holds some of the last glimpses of my imprinted father
parchments and pictures that still hold him to me.
I can't loose him again. 

© 2012 Eager to Learn


Author's Note

Eager to Learn
Sorry if it's not really poetry, more just feelings I want out. I'll take any suggestions to improve, thanks for reading.

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This is a very beautiful poem, and really emotional too. We make poetry what we want it to be, and there's no shame in writing whatever you want. Good job, and kudos to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked it. Good emotion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You know what I really liked it :) even if it was just feelings you wrote them out very well and I could feel them. Really good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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