Presence of Reality
A Poem by Raven Starhawk
An ambiance’s fruitlet
A Root to dreams
Decadence among cadence
A course preset
The silhouette of magic
Diluting
the truth
3/1/2013
Blood
Beneath
Serrated
silver
A
ghost’s reflection
In
a shattered mirror
Is
as she was in life
Dead
© 2013 Raven Starhawk
Author's Note
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The picture is of me. >.>
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Loved the line "A course preset"
Posted 10 Years Ago
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"A ghost’s reflection
In a shattered mirror
Is as she was in life
Dead"
stunning, horrifying image here...nice
Posted 10 Years Ago
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Oh....hon, superb! Smiling here xoxo
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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What drama, what power. These are words to cringe to, to wonder at. Sometimes you convert words into something invisitble but felt, deep deep inside. To me this seems less of death, more a transition. Stay safe, please.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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oh my goodness! This is haunting...the ghost of time and reality merging into the painful mirror of reflection. This saddens me. You write with such searing words! This truly grabs my heart! Great write!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on March 1, 2013
Last Updated on March 1, 2013
Tags: misery, angst, death, depression, suicide, chaos, confusion, discouraged, broken, ill, insanity, writing, poem, writerscafe
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