Diablo

When veils between realms bleed together 

 

And misguided steps lead down into hell’s infinity

 

Diablo gathers angels’ broken wings

 

Steam billows from his nostrils

 

As dragon’s fire highlights dark contours

 

Of mortal and god

 

But not before the raven dives

 

And is devoured by damnation’s kiss

 

Reviews

[Layla J Omorose]

This was a very vivid poem. Could almost feel the fire and danger. Good write

[R.A. Youngblood]

I like your imagery, It's very fun to read, and i got no problem with following! I specially like the ending, it's most powerful to me. Relaxing and breathtaking! Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

adventurous write...and "damnation's kiss" is an absolutely stunning phrase! xx

[Alicia Beavis]

Love your diction in this piece.

So true!

An Atheist bows, and pukes the word Amen to you... :D
Lovely write dear.
As all is within the core.

E.L.