Crimson Rose

red rose

Holds beauty and grace within each petal

A symbol for lovers of feelings true

So wild and untamed

Yet gentle as a kiss

With wicked thorns run deep

Upon it's wielder who holds with carelessness

Colors are many but crimson favored

Admired with aw

Soft as velvet

With sent so sweet

Majestic Pose

Royalty of all blooms

Red so deep as blood

The ancient name....

Crimson Rose

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

Very nice, it is a flower that represents love but love sometimes cuts deep...

[Raven]

thank you for your kind words, do you feel i could change anything, and thank your for the idea for cutting on the punctuations, it sounds much better

[William Liston]

This was amazing. I loved reading this. I like how you didn't use much punctuation in this; it was like I could feel each word melting my soul. When I finished reading this, I finally remembered to breathe; I don't remember it too clearly, but I'm pretty sure I was holding my breath the whole time I read this. You've definitely earned my respect with this poem (by respect, I mean appreciation for your skills). Great job. Now, if you'd excuse me, I'm about to read this a fourth time :)

-William Liston