The Horror!

oH! the horR0r, thE h0Rr0r of what must be...
a day's work of social activities.
too much of this and not enough of that!
tip top, flip flop, s**t, s**t and shat.
Dang.
is it over?
No. No. Not yet...
the day is only done ...
when you're full of regrets.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Filled with energy and drive. Life is a mess sometime. Nothing fall into place. Nice flow of thoughts led to a honest ending. Thank you Raven for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just get in a rut....and each day just passes by...but without fanfare...and we regret choosing the path we did---we settle for less.

[costa siwale]

too much of this and not enough of that!
tip top, flip flop, s**t, s**t and shat. hahaha, i like this, its ...lyrical

[Raven Wyntermoon]

Grazi Costa for feeling that vibe as rhythm is something I enjoy reading & incorporating.

[costa siwale]

You do it so well, wish you would give me a few pointers lol

[Raven Wyntermoon]

You have the beat... re-read your comment :
"You do it so well,
wish you would give me a few pointers,
lol..."

[costa siwale]

hahaha, i see!