Within and Without

Within and Without

A Poem by Rebel Manikin

 

This power inside is powered from without
So many are unable
To slake the thirst
 
This fire within is fueled from without
So many eagerly deny
What this life is about
 
This love within is created without
So many dance with thought
Just to befriend its doubt
 
This passion within flows from without
So many look to know its true desire,
Though rarely seek it out
 
This you within accompanies you without
So many hollow men live
Without their spirits sound

© 2009 Rebel Manikin


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Again, such truth to live by. Your pen knows well of our being, and it's mechanics.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Within your writing, it shows of beauty. Without my great use of words, you've showed me how through your poem. Another great poem I've read today, which is not easy to find nowadays. In this poem and in my opinion, the message is flowing on the surface, yet, there are more to be explored within it. Very thoughtful to me, and I really enjoy every word of it.

Thank you for sharing over this site. Please keep up the good work :) Will read more of your work soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


with all Sincerity i have to say, though beautiful and potent both emotionally and visually, in spite of its simplicity. Beautiful as always, well written:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this Sincerity. I am sorta tired tonight and I just am enjoying my friends works, but I have to make one quick comment..."So many seem to tango with thought to befriend its doubt"...I wish I had written that! :) You are a wonderfully talented artist, thanks for sharing, t.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 9, 2009
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