Her,Emergency

My eyes are foggy
and mind screaming at me
telling me I'm not worth it
saying I should never live.
I can't take it
its driving me crazy
Just this once I wanted to do things right
But,
it didn't work.
How could I betray myself so quickly
My hearts screaming a thousands words
I cant comprehend them.
Please
Get me help
for I am much to weak to be doing this
for any matter
all by myself
I'm Free Falling into the clouds
I just want to let go
I want to feel happy
I don't feel right tonight My minds eating away at my very soul.
I'm A girl, I wanna keep it that simple.
but it will never be, no matter how many times I break my own heart.
I cant think
Just this once I wanted to do things right.
My inner self shakes
and it hides itself from all the world.
Never Again
Free Fall
into happiness
don't let it grab you
and take a hold of what you worked so hard to be.
I Cant breath
I can't think
I Can't Sleep!
My hearts breaking at the speed of light
I'm not free
Nor will i ever be
Let Me Go
Im a girl, I wanna keep it that simple.
Please,
GetMeHelp I want to wake up

Not confused

and not dazed
Because of my short upcomings
Look at me
and see
I made of a thousand words
more than I can ever say
Its Killing me
Emergency
911
There's a crisis
And her names Sarah
She hasn't been Breathing
and or thinking
as she just lays there
and looks blankly into what she thinks
hurt her all along
shes hard like stone
Her Hearts no where to be found
As she sits there
Her eyes are foggy
her mind screaming at her
telling her she's not worth it
saying she should never live.
Not even I can take it
She sits there
like there's no world to hold onto
its driving me crazy
Just this once she wanted to do things right
But,
it didn't work.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The internal struggle is powerful in your words. It is hard to do the right thing always. We can be harder on our mistakes then others. Life is a road where we will fall many times. If we are lucky we get up wiser and more intelligent. I like the pace and the repetition in the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[ebonpinion]

Wow, this is really good. I loved the flair and the dramatics. This was really a good read. Hope you keep writing more on here. ^_^