Fire

The fires of anger pump throughout my vains.
The flames burn the dancing dames.
You are the one and only one to blame.
You don't believe it,what a shame.

You should have thought of that before you played your game.
Jar of hearts,
What a shame.

You will never have my heart or dignity,
Even though you almost got my virginity.

You liar and coward,
Lie down your sword.
You do not even follow your own promise,
Your own word.

I put my dagger against your throat,
And your men coward away to your precious boat.

You never loved me,Serpents tongue.
Go away,satans son!

Be gone with you!
There is nothing here for you to have won.

Your stuff is in the trash,
Want some?

Here's what's left of you,
A blurry and fading memory of what's you once were to me.
Too bad you couldn't follow through.
You lied to me,and I know you still do.

Away with you serpents tongue.
You are a cowardly loser and your lies have come undone...

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

Like a tiger or something proud and assertive. Well done :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much :D

[♪Barklight♪]

your poems remind me of something from anouther world. verry powerful use of words, well done!

[Soul Fire]

Thank you :D

[DarknessPeering]

Very powerful :)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you :D

[Steven Cash]

Very nice. Glad you told him off

I only hope he can see this :)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you,?This is about my ex

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wohoo, you go tell him...poetically gets the message across !!!

[Soul Fire]

Thank you this is About my ex

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

tell him once again :p

[Soul Fire]

Ahahaha