Roses

Roses

A Poem by Soul Fire

She walks down the aisle with ribbons in her hair,
Holding a flower bouquet,
A man holding her arm.

No this isn't her father,this is a guy named ''Rob.''
This is not her wedding,
This is not her day.

This is the story of a brides maid

She is the brides bathroom aid.
She holds up the brides dress,
So she doesn't make a mess.

She helped plan this day.
She sheds tears as your being given away.

She is one of your closest friends.
She's been there since you two were four,
maybe since highschool,
Maybe later on or before.

She's like a sister to you.
She hooked you up on blind dates.
One of them was very embarrassing,remember that day?

She shared her chocolate,
When you PMS'd 
She poured you some wine,
When your boyfriend became an ex.

She is your bridesmaid.
She is here on your wedding day.

Just don't forget her.
Make sure she stays.

Because she was there on your wedding day.

And when you threw the bouquet,
Shortly after she was given away.

No more ''Always the bridesmaid,never the bride.''
Now your her bridesmaid,
Get ready for a wild ride.

You are now the bride's aid.

© 2012 Soul Fire


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A very interesting poem. A bridesmaid is a needed and useless person. I wonder what a bridesmaid is thinking surrounded by so much joy. Being close and far away at the same time. I like the way you ended the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you



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You must have been to a wedding and most likely were the bridesmaid. I can tell with the emotion in your words. Very excellently written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

I've been to a few weddings, but I've never been a bridesmaid,aha :) Thank you for the review
C.A. Lucas

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
This is great. Wonderful job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thanks,Missy! :D
A very interesting poem. A bridesmaid is a needed and useless person. I wonder what a bridesmaid is thinking surrounded by so much joy. Being close and far away at the same time. I like the way you ended the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you
I like the story it tells, but as a piece of constructive criticism, this isn't your best piece. In and of itself, it's a pretty little story, but you have better! I did like it though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
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Pax
a wonderful tale.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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