Keep Going

A Poem by Soul Fire

Trying to look forward,

When the past wants you to look back.

It's really hard when it's calls are calling you back.

Trying to look forward when the past wants you back.

Keep going, keep going.

You dont need their crap.

Keep looking ahead, keep looking forward.

Don't turn back,

keep your eyes on the track

© 2013 Soul Fire

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Broken Soul

Short and simple but there's quite a bit of meaning behind it. A great thing you did was say "their" on line 6. Sure it's talking about the calls but it can also be talking about people. People hurt others all of the time and often try to gain them back. Many people, actually almost everyone, can relate to that. Great work with this, no doubt about it!

10/10

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I just wrote it off the top of my head a few moments ago! :)

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Broken Soul

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I just wrote it off the top of my head a few moments ago! :)

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Added on February 4, 2013
Last Updated on February 4, 2013

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Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada

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Hello, I'm Raya. I love music,writing and singing.I'm always writing or creating something.I really enjoy singing and writing my own music.I write stories,poems and books.I have a large variety of.. more..

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