An introspective thought on a fleeting moment of time.

An introspective thought on a fleeting moment of time.

It begins.
A feeling deep within.

It builds.
Anticipation mounts.


The purge.
Continuous flow.


The end.
Sweet release.


I BROKE WIND .

Author's Note

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

This is me having a go at myself.....

[Antoinette]

It fit my mood. Kinda needed to read something like this. Well done!

[FlatLineBeauty]

hahahaha, I loved this. it was silly. I love it when people can make me laugh. xo Winter

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is funny and I can see your funny side, Ray. Cool music, too.
Nice!

[sonnetmoon]

ha-ha this is incredibly funny. I was expecting something deep, philosophical and thought provoking. The creativity in this short poem is great. Poetry does not have to be serious. Thank you for posting this poem Raymond Federle.
-sonnetmoon

[Raymond Federle]

Long time no see. Wad up wit dat!?!? LOL Welcome back and thanks!

[sonnetmoon]

Yes I am glad to be back. I am currently suffering from writers block ha-ha. Thank you for posting this.
-Sonnetmoon

[R. L. Hill]

LAWL. NOT what I was expecting for this ending. WOW. This is freaking hilarious. I thought you going to get all deep and passionate and then bam...you fart.

[Raymond Federle]

I think I fooled everyone on this one... if I'm not being amazing and awe inspiring then I'm doing something wrong. :)

[R. L. Hill]

I think it is brilliant. We shouldn't be so used to a common form that the uncommon shocks us. Proves to me that you have tons more talent than I think we originally gave you credit.

[RealistMe]

LMAO! So, wait. This is a poem about farting? LOL! Gotta love it! This wasn't something I was expecting.

[Trevor Barnett]

Well, I thought this was gonna be a very thought provoking philosophical poem at first. Then it turns out to be just a thought on passing lol! Very funny Raymond!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

:D This is amazing! So unexpected. Marvelous and absolutely hilarious!

[MsJewel]

LOL! I never suspected that ending! Cute and clever Raymond!

:) Julie

[Raymond Federle]

Thanks Jules :)