Aggravated by Your Annoyance

Tell me, how did you find me
my stain in the glass.

You looked so different in the past.
Even so, how did i grow tired of you so fast.

When  questioning me what I thought of you
"There's a fly in my soup." I'd gasp.

I hope this isn't permanent,
you seem so determined.

I must confess, your presence
has as much impact as a cold,

or should I include,
that's what I've been told.

Your cooking is to die for.
Literally.

Your stories, they bore me.
Please shut up.

"Oh not you darling! I was talking to that dog"
I'd react so utterly.

I don't mind your stares, but don't get too close to me
for heaven sake's
Your touches are strangling as that of a snake's.

I can never get  too far with you lingering where ever i go, it's as if i were being possessed by a ghost.

I'm doing very well, thank you very much
by all means I don't need you as my host.

If only you'd understand,
how much my alone time needs to expand.

I am no longer mesmerized by your  gaze
For your face, is starting to look like a maze

nor am i captivated by your ape -like smile
while at work, my number please don't dial.

The sight of your teary face
doesn't work on me anymore,
of that I'm sure.

Please don't stare,
do something about that untidy hair.

I beg of you, why can't you see,
that together we  were never meant to be.

Author's Note

At some point some relationships fade and become duller and this poem kinda explains that situation (apparently through the guy's perspective.)
I just thought of this after watching one of those romance/comedy movies. Criticize away by all means.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Omg. That is so cruel. But feel of disgust sounded so authentic, i had to recheck again to see if it wasl actually a personal experience. I would not have guessed it was a male prospective until I read your author's note. Maybe it is because bitterness and aloofness towards one another is not bound by gender, or perhaps it is because I would not picture a man with so many intense emotions gurgling up his throat like venom. Overall, the rhymes, I luuved, because they fit well and the stanzas flow very smoothly. You are writer with many promising pieces to come to life, or atleast that's what I think. Just one tiny correction:

"While (in) work." i think you meant: (at) work? Keep it up. Thanks for posting.

[M Garcia]

This was written quite well. I'm sure many men have thought this before. Keep it up.