Midnight Reverie

Many of you might relate to this, we always reminisce and imagine things before we sleep, some say it's pointless, some say it's something......Wonderful? Amazing? Its up to you.

Comfortably laying in my bed,
As random thoughts fills my head,
plans for tomorrow, new things to do,
scenarios that wouldn't likely to happen too.

The moon in the sky, shining bright
Blackbirds starts singing in the dead of night
As i start gripping my pillows tight
My lucid mind takes flight.

As my sweet reverie start,
Hopes and dreams starts to fill my heart,
As i turn my imaginations into works of art,
I hope that the things i love will never part.

those distant places i want to go,
New wonders set to explore and to cope.
Flamboyant sceneries my eyes craves to thrill,
And its peculiar but tranquil ambiance i yearn to feel

Those people i've loved, known and missed,
might come and go like the morning mist,
As their vivid memories fills my head with bliss,
i suddenly felt the sandman's kiss

As my mind ponders and drifts away,
The night is slowly shifting into day,
And as my consciousness begins to fade,
Good night, sweet dreams, go forth, set sail

Author's Note

This is my first poem, so feel free to review and criticize my work, point out my errors and flaws (choice of words, grammar etc.), and feel free to give tips and advices to improve my writings. Thank you.


(You caught that BEATLES reference don't you? )

Reviews

[Hannah Morgan]

I love this. It creates vivid imagery which all readers can relate to in one way or another.
Be very proud of your work. I have one suggestion, I am trying to integrate it in to my own work so I hope you are not offended. If you are writing from a personal viewpoint, if possible try not to use 'I'. Providing imagery and describing sensation is enough.
I hope I have been helpful. Once again, well done on a fab piece of work.

[R.S.T]

Much appreciated !