Blossoming Dreams

Blossoming Dreams

A Poem by Rebecca J Martin

When the sun shines,
It shines bright…
It’s what you see,
And what you might.
When you look above,
Look really high.
Past all the clouds,
Beyond the sky!
What you dream in your heart,
You can make it be.
Just become a part,
Of what your mind can see.
Your future can be written,
Within the walls of your mind.
Just take action,
In what you find.
Feel with your thoughts,
Touch with your soul.
Bring it together,
And make your life whole.
Life is the beginning,
To what you become.
It’s where you take it,
And how you blossom.

© RebeccaJeanine71

© 2018 Rebecca J Martin


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Wonderful and hopeful poetry Rebecca. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. We decide our life. Better to seek joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome Rebecca.
Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

If it would let me type a heart I would... u have a true heart!!! :)
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Very moving. Such optimism is what I'm all about. I like this piece. The format itself is like a tower that illustrates the message very well. It's as if it is draping from the sky and smiling among everyone. Don't give up on dreams because when you don't anything can happen, you could even blossom. That's what I got from this. Such motivational is contagious; it spreads. Amazing work. Great read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

Aww!!! Thank you!!! I'm glad you got the message I was putting out there!!!
Such uplifting words, I can feel the pure intent and warm heart that penned a message as sweet as this. It's refreshing to read something that makes you want to try, makes you want to accomplish and most importantly makes you want to believe in yourself. Kudos, this is motivational.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

Aww!!! Thank you so much!!! I
Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

I LOVE Kudos btw!! 🤗
Beautiful and optimistic!Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

Thank you SO much!!!
Wonderful and hopeful poetry Rebecca. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. We decide our life. Better to seek joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome Rebecca.
Rebecca J Martin

2 Years Ago

If it would let me type a heart I would... u have a true heart!!! :)
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