Headlights

A blur of lights staring blankly at me...

Too scared to move,

Too afraid to breathe.

Taking in what must be happening,

Closing my eyes as the driver stomps the accleration.

Standing silently,

Knowing if I move there was no use.

The car coming at me.

I must face my horrible fate.

Hit.

I fall to the ground, numbness in my entire body.

Take a last breath.

A blur of lights staring blankly at me...

Reviews

[Niki Wilson]

Auwsome write!

[Anthony Garcia]

i really enjoyed this, really did =]
what would have made this insane, is if you gave no hints really untill the end. As is though, awesome, good stuff =]

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am no psychiatrist but I would say if this was a dream it would represent someone who has fallen in love and is scared of it. A great read.

[Fantasia Allmighty]

It's pretty good. The dude who ran you over. I'll get him lol. Read breath plez thanks

[Aggie Skeleton]

Pain. I'll kill that dork who ran you down.

[Mithridate]

that would probably hurt! i'll find out who ran over you! i love you :) great poem!