Broken Heart

Broken Heart

A Poem by Rebi Valeska
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a short description of how love can hurt you when you least expect it.

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Daggers shine
Disguised like harmless arrows 
From cupids quiver

© 2013 Rebi Valeska


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Simply Wit,,, and sharply crafted.

Posted 10 Years Ago


EXcellent write.....Brilliant thoughts!!! Cupid the God of love has harmless arrows designed to lovingly strike those who want to fall in love.Those same arrows are actually daggers that can strike people dead

Posted 10 Years Ago


Masterful...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I know the feeling
Many times
Don`t believe them
It don`t heal
You just get to feeling mean
You ask and ask, No sex appeal ?"
What`s wrong with me, what`s the deal ?
Sorry ! Just feeling sorry for myself, you`r o.k.
Someday Mr. Right will come and you will smile
and brush your hair..... I know, once I was there.

----- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful write.
Eloquently expressed.
Love the imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Rebi Valeska
Rebi Valeska

down in, MS



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