antique bathroom

a floor board's soggy creak.

leaks softened wood to mush.

hushed visitors creep,

seep through cracks.

slat's openings play home.

loam's children mushroom'd.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Really good piece sweet, I see what you mean, there way you have written this keeps the continuation going, very nicely done!

xx

[ettorney]

Nice imagery. Short, concise analogous. :)