a poet's envy

(clouds flowing, stones rolling, dogwoods bent- kissing

white petals floating, scattering

spring wind folds over crisp water's edge)

         experiencing

         nature's poetry

written upon war eagle creek

         i find myself envious

Reviews

[Albatross]

Short, simple, and inspiring. Very nice :)

[Alicante lullaby]

surreal..angry.

[Ruth]

Oh wow! Now, this one is really wonderful! I love your work! xx

[MissWordSmith]

I love the confidence that shone through. The last line was perfect.
Great write! And thank you for your review on my poem :)

[Libby McKeown]

I love how pronounced your imagery is, how real, and yet so simple, the snapshot. The words flow, and match, the creek. Excellent work!