The Game of the Snake

Not the most proud of this piece of earlier work, but I decided to post it anyways.

 

For he who has no name
Come here and play my game.

With a barrel and a noose
Its time to set you loose.

There was nothing left to take.
The friends you had were fake.

No'one was here to save you
It's their souls your pain will get to.

Are your glad your played my game?
You won but still have no fame.

Like a celebrity you know how to rock!
Plummet down and never stop.

I am an evil, slimy, snake
But its you who's body will bake.

There was only ignorance inside you.
With some help you could of flew.

Reviews

[The Batman]

Few grammatical errors that could be fixed, nothing major. Great metaphors and nice flow to this well-crafted poem. Great job and keep up the good work.