Fading friendship

Love u freinds :)

What is happening to everyone ?
Nobody is enjoying or having fun
With this life , i am all done
I want to shoot myself with a gun
Everyone is getting angry for one or the other reason
And no one is firm on one's decisions
They are blaming each other
Forgetting the helps and goods of one another
We use to have fun together
But now everything is changing with the weather
Winter is going taking along our happiness,
Making us dumb , feelings suppressed
No one is sharing what we previously use to
Everyone is busy with their new works to do
We promised to be forever together
But why we are going away like flying feathers
Our friendship was not so weak and light
That it will fade away one day with the DEVIL'S SIGHT ....

Reviews

[The Waterlily Pad]

Emotion-packed. It all seems crammed. Clearly your motive was to express some sort of anguish/ period your going through. However, I'd suggest you tame it a little and add some extra little facts to keep the interest throughout the poem. Make it not only suggest some emotion but a little story of why and how- possibly an anecdote? Overall, your brave poem linked with poetry devices is very much appreciated😊!!

[QueenTonia]

"Everything is changing with the weather" that line is really on point. Nothings's permanent💯

[Reet Kaur]

Ya ..exactly ...hope evry1 undrstnds wht i wnt to express....nd thnks ...tht u liked it

[eransodhi]

Nicely written but dont worry we're with you still 😜😜

[Reet Kaur]

Thanks eran....whn u r there..wht to worry

[Reet Kaur]

I cannot even imagine where I would be today were it not for that handful of friends who have given me a heart full of joy. Let's face it, friends make life a lot more fun......LUV UR FRIENDS