Fake Phony Fruadulent Mother F..........

Fake Phony Fruadulent Mother F..........

A Poem by Zeitgeist Manifesto
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Pretty self explanitory

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Some people
are straight up fake
but there are others

Who take a whole decade
To show
Their true colors

Revenge is a dish
best served
when cold

So I'll cater
to the traitors
Ten fold

© 2011 Zeitgeist Manifesto


Author's Note

Zeitgeist Manifesto
2010 saw friendships end
over 10 years in

Happiness is always the best revenge. :)
Carrying all that emotional baggage will give you carpel tunnel.

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~ ohhhhhhhh... i almost wish i did not relate to this brilliant piece so deeply...

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Dom
This poem speaks truth. Its real life and it dragged me in. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow...that one line jumped right out at me:

"Revenge is a dish best served when cold."

Wow....that made me think....just woah. My mind is blown.

Posted 10 Years Ago


=D I like the calm matter of fact attitude. Although the anger, bitterness could shine through it's shrugged off with a satisfied smile as you know you're far better off and you've won out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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OT
how true this poem is!! people are fake, but the colours will shine through eventually as their stories and masks become more fragmented over time!! and I agree happiness is the best revenge!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. Spot on, bang on. Serve it cold and it'll hit em hard, blank and wailing..Great job..A quick jolt, this one is...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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LOL indeed to your notes..

Sometimes we out grow people - and they are no longer who we thought they were..because we all grow and change..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh nicely written! Short, cute, rhyming perfectly, and to the point - LOVE IT!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Superb! I adore this one!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is hot....even though served cold! ha :)
our taste buds change ~ how ya like that pun :)
i'm learning :)
this was cool!
free yourself of baggage and don't come back to claim them :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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