Fake Phony Fruadulent Mother F..........

Pretty self explanitory

Some people
are straight up fake
but there are others

Who take a whole decade
To show
Their true colors

Revenge is a dish
best served
when cold

So I'll cater
to the traitors
Ten fold

Author's Note

2010 saw friendships end
over 10 years in

Happiness is always the best revenge. :)
Carrying all that emotional baggage will give you carpel tunnel.

Reviews

[. serah .]

~ ohhhhhhhh... i almost wish i did not relate to this brilliant piece so deeply...

[Dom]

This poem speaks truth. Its real life and it dragged me in. Great job!

[Emunah June.]

Wow...that one line jumped right out at me:

"Revenge is a dish best served when cold."

Wow....that made me think....just woah. My mind is blown.

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

=D I like the calm matter of fact attitude. Although the anger, bitterness could shine through it's shrugged off with a satisfied smile as you know you're far better off and you've won out.

[OT]

how true this poem is!! people are fake, but the colours will shine through eventually as their stories and masks become more fragmented over time!! and I agree happiness is the best revenge!!

[Nothing Personal]

Wow. Spot on, bang on. Serve it cold and it'll hit em hard, blank and wailing..Great job..A quick jolt, this one is...

[.]

LOL indeed to your notes..

Sometimes we out grow people - and they are no longer who we thought they were..because we all grow and change..

[Angel's Lady]

Oh nicely written! Short, cute, rhyming perfectly, and to the point - LOVE IT!

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Superb! I adore this one!!!

[Liza]

this is hot....even though served cold! ha :)
our taste buds change ~ how ya like that pun :)
i'm learning :)
this was cool!
free yourself of baggage and don't come back to claim them :)