Fake Phony Fruadulent Mother F..........

Fake Phony Fruadulent Mother F..........

A Poem by Zeitgeist Manifesto

Pretty self explanitory

Some people
are straight up fake
but there are others

Who take a whole decade
To show
Their true colors

Revenge is a dish
best served
when cold

So I'll cater
to the traitors
Ten fold

© 2011 Zeitgeist Manifesto

Author's Note

Zeitgeist Manifesto
2010 saw friendships end
over 10 years in

Happiness is always the best revenge. :)
Carrying all that emotional baggage will give you carpel tunnel.

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~ ohhhhhhhh... i almost wish i did not relate to this brilliant piece so deeply...

Posted 7 Years Ago

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This poem speaks truth. Its real life and it dragged me in. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow...that one line jumped right out at me:

"Revenge is a dish best served when cold."

Wow....that made me think....just woah. My mind is blown.

Posted 13 Years Ago

=D I like the calm matter of fact attitude. Although the anger, bitterness could shine through it's shrugged off with a satisfied smile as you know you're far better off and you've won out.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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how true this poem is!! people are fake, but the colours will shine through eventually as their stories and masks become more fragmented over time!! and I agree happiness is the best revenge!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow. Spot on, bang on. Serve it cold and it'll hit em hard, blank and wailing..Great job..A quick jolt, this one is...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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LOL indeed to your notes..

Sometimes we out grow people - and they are no longer who we thought they were..because we all grow and change..

Posted 13 Years Ago

Oh nicely written! Short, cute, rhyming perfectly, and to the point - LOVE IT!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Superb! I adore this one!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is hot....even though served cold! ha :)
our taste buds change ~ how ya like that pun :)
i'm learning :)
this was cool!
free yourself of baggage and don't come back to claim them :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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13 Reviews
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Added on January 27, 2011
Last Updated on January 27, 2011
Tags: dish, serve, enemy, friend, betrayal, revenge


Zeitgeist Manifesto
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