UNMINDFUL

UNMINDFUL

A Poem by Rene Velez
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My attempt at Alphabetic Sequence.

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and beliefs commit
darker eternal fathoms,
gasping hours internally
joust Karma lovingly,
mammoth nights,
obdormitions perception,
quale reclamations sabotage twilight,
undyingly,
visions wander xeniumly
yearning zen

© 2012 Rene Velez


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Rene Velez
My attempt at Alphabetic Sequence. dabbling in structures

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Beastly style. I should try this sometime.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love challenging myself, which you have done here, and succeeded! You have challenged me, also (running for my dictionary!). Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow. that was really awesome. u managed it so perfectly and meaningful!


Posted 12 Years Ago



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