The One Broken Eye

The final part of No Doubt For A Lying Man he is now dead and is trying to reclaim his spiritual passage

My blasted raining voice claims a shadowed upheaval

The contested rain of flames drain my life worth

The blasted inferno of Earth cleanse my conscience

A broken man now stands atop the mountain of my deceit

I ask not of prize or luxury

But of Forgiveness and Amnesty 

Ten grueling shrieks have i heard 

Because of the ten Beautiful voices i have turned

i do not forget of days past

for i cannot

as i turned to the ones i called comrades

they left me to rot

so now i stand before you oh mighty Father

Claim me as your child or not

my Destiny is to suffer 

For lies i remember or forgot

Author's Note

"Please keep an open mind"

Reviews

[Thomas Skahill]

As a final part I think this piece works well, it has a sense of wrapping things up and is full of rich, vivid imagery. I like the description of Earth as Inferno (I.e Hell or state of suffering) and the connection it has to our environmental concerns. I havn't read the other part of your work but it seems to be touching on some biblical aspects which I would just want to say are worthy of being fastidiously fact checked or referenced to avoid unwanted controversy.

[PillsDontWork]

Thanks for reading , i haven't really been writing that long and it feels great to see people liking what i post