I Can See You

I Can See You

A Poem by Mariah Jane
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A song to Drew

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You see everything,

You see the pain and brokenness.

You see everything,

But you’re not used to being seen.

 

The pain is locked inside,

Hopelessness has taken hold.

The darkness comes,

Your heart is yearning for something unknown.

 

You see everything…

Well,

I can see you.

 

You look behind their eyes,

Praying that they won’t be blind.

You’re reaching out,

Trying to lead them to the Truth.

 

I see your pain.

I see you crying deep inside.

Silent tears,

My heart is reaching out.

 

You see everything…

Still not used to being seen.

I can see you.

 

I can see you!

I can see you!

I can see you better then you’ll ever know.

I can see you!

I can see you!

I can see into your heart.

 

Your heart is good.

You’re always seeking out the Truth.

You hide away,

Afraid to be seen for who you are.

 

I’m not afraid.

You say I should be…

But your eyes say so much more!

 

I can see you!

I can see you!

I can see the hopelessness and fear.

I can see you!

I can see you!

I can see you need somebody, too.

 

Three strands of cord

Cannot be torn.

You’re not alone.

I’m walking with you all the way.

You cannot hide…

 

I can see you.

© 2011 Mariah Jane


Author's Note

Mariah Jane
This is another one of those songs that I write... I hope you like it. I'd like your opinion on the order of verses and the like.

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simply beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is going to make a beautiful song! wish i could hear the music that goes with it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The write itself is really good. The order of the verses are fine. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mariah Jane

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I am a wife, mother, college student and Barista. (I make espresso drinks and stuff). I'm only 23. I write for fun... I enjoy creating worlds and I have tons of great ideas. I am a musician... so I wr.. more..

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