[Metalic Swamp]

My dreams are pretty crazy. But have you had a dream where you feel like your dying, even if you are the one controling the dream??

These things fill my surreal dreams.

The nightmares come and rip them up from the seams.

Metalic Swamps and Golden Roses,

Evil words leave me in difficult poses.

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The place where imagination rots of decay.

Where the moon is brightest during the day.

The place where the stars can't shine bright.

Where I'm trapped, alone, unable to find light.

Author's Note

Constructed Critizm! I love hearing what you think, even if it's advice!

Reviews

[Alicia Hirshey]

I love the Imagery behind this. The feeling of being alone is one that will never go away. You have expressed it well.