The confession

This poem is about a confession made by a girl to her best friend. She's in a dilemma if she was right or wrong to do that. There are some metaphors used in place of right and wrong.

"The Confession"
Was it really needed,
Or just insanity?
Oh! That confession,
she still wonders,
if it was relief or an obstruction!
That instant,
and she was under his incantation,
but who knew that the charm,
would obfuscate who she was.
Oh! That confession,
she still wonders,
if it was a rose or a thorn!
An erroneous interpretation,
and she fell upon those teary evenings,
those mirthless days,
and those sleepless nights.
Oh! That confession,
she still wonders,
if it was velvet or sandpaper!
Those indefinite interlocutions,
seemed to reach their terminus,
with more of clunkiness and falterings,
less of liss and wantings.
Oh! That confession,
she still wonders,
if it was a sweven or actuality!
Oh! That damned confession!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Onlyme]

Good interesting read with depth, perspective and understand. Good use of debating emotions felt inside this piece.

[Ritu]

Thanks! :)