Washed Up Beauty Queen

She grew up in the backwoods of Ohio; the kind of town people spend the first half of their life in only to run away from it in their last half. She had everything girl could have ever wanted. She was a prom queen beauty and possessed enough wit that could charm the legs off a table. As time passed, she grew tired, and now she spends her time in that same ol' shanty town where she spends most of her days trailing facebook fantasizing over her old classmates' pages wondering what life could have been if she would have only left...

Author's Note

Any and all feedback welcome! Would love to get up with different writers for consistent critiques! Feel free to message me. :)

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

This was an interesting read, would love to find out more about this beauty like why did she choose to stay. If there is something I can critic about it will be in the second sentence, I would say it needs to read "She had everything a girl could..." Might have been a miss type but otherwise I did enjoy reading this very much

L.V.

[A.Renae]

Thanks, L.V.!

I appreciate your taking the time to read my writing! And yes, I have a typo in there. I need to fix that. I'm being lazy :P

I'll swing by your page when I hop on later and take a look at your stuff! And yes, I need to finish her story as to why she stuck around. That's a good point. lol

[A.Renae]

By the way, this was just a quick, in-class assignment. I've been toying around with different character ideas for my next novel.