B***h (with green eyes)

green eyes
wisdom of ages shines through
sun pouring on her
rise, beauty, rise

confident strides
although cautious at times
protecting her stronghold
the home she resides

so loyal
she comes when you call
expecting affection
attitude’s royal

my love
she’ll gladly accept
for awhile….
until she decides she’s above

all that
she doesn’t need you
she’s a b***h with green eyes
funny thing, she’s my cat

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

Haha, nice piece. :)

The flow felt a bit disjointed in some places for me, but otherwise.. great job. c:

Coral

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

Nice poem about the cat, but i don't understand what relation it had with the title, may be is for confusing the reader with a final twist??? anyways the poem was good, and you have entered this for friendship day contest? so this cat is your best friend??
love live your friendship!!
Thanks for entering the contest.

[Mia]

Lol, the surprise ending made me laugh! Great job, it was beautifully written.

[Antonio Valentino]

:))) great write!

I have a wonderful black cat too, but he's a b*****d not a bit.. lol

Really enjoyed this, great job!
Antonio

[Brad]

a lot of great writers from your neck of the woods...is there something in that cleveland water??? can you bottle it and send me some? nice write, anything with "b***h" in the title can't be bad...haha

[NSisifo]

My cat never came when I called. Unless I had food of course.
All cats are pitches, though. Even the males.

[KaySea]

very nice. loved it

[Richard Williams]

A well-painted picture of a cat, so independent, so aloof, precious to us. A very good poem, purring.

[Romeion Case]

aaww. nice. animals have a language and a world of their own and we can only but look on and try to understand what goes through their minds. :-) nice perspective.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I adore it!!!~ love the plush side fllipped through into a strong stride of will~I am especiay partial to cats and one with green eyes just bewitch me~
the sentence "b***h with green eyes" makes me smile all lopsided and quirky because one loser would spit those words at his least civil and could never understand why it made me grin~ ;)~ love it!!!