Will We Still?

A poem...

Will we still,

talk about clumsiness,

won't run out of things to say,

I'll still be by your side,

you know me well,

you can know me better,

I'll take your hand,

there's nowhere we will not go,

we can still,

still stick together,

you and I,

can stay like this forever.

Reviews

[Noting Society]

I felt like it was a bit choppy and a tad bit cliche. Other than that it was really good. I would suggest using some more figurative language. Maybe even make it longer. I think that would fix both issues I had with it. However, poetry is more about the writer than its audience so if you think its perfect than its perfect. Well done you're a great writer!