Let it go

It grew so fast, from the lowest ground

She said it too, it stretched to the stars beyond

The boy didn't believe, but love was found

To keep it, she wants a quest, and that is sound

 

She wills it, and that is fine

As long she smiles, it will be sublime

Through the deserts, past the sea

He fell from heaven, to what he failed to see

 

Fingers tire, the tips begin to bleed

He holds on the cliff, he waits for her

The angel’s woe, oh they woe

Let it go, to end the pain

 

The story is corrupted by stench of sin

The boy turns back to be encouraged by her grin

All the creatures of the land lie dead

Who wants peace? He wants her instead

 

Her eyes, her lips give him the fire

For the promised love, he must achieve desire

Nothing will stop him, no its love

He has to win in the end, because its love

 

She wills it, and that is fine

As long she smiles, it will be sublime

Through the deserts, past the sea

He fell from heaven, to what he failed to see

 

Fingers tire, the tips begin to bleed

He holds on the cliff, he waits for her

The angel’s woe, oh they woe

Let it go, to end the pain         x2 (Entire chorus) 

 

No! *Child´s echo

 

Fatigue begins to settle within his chest

He wasted his strength on the rest

The last beast appears from the fog

Wounds of blood poured, the boy wasn´t strong enough

 

The boy turned back to be reassured

But she wasn’t there, no he wasn´t cured

He cried her name out, wasn´t he not loud?

The warrior approached, no she wasn´t found

 

Fingers tire, the tips begin to bleed -------------------- oh no (stretched)

He holds on the cliff, he waits for her

The angel’s woe, oh they woe

Let it go, to end the pain            x2 (Entire chorus) 

 

No! *Child´s echo

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mira ThePoetess]

I loved it .... it's nice and touching ..... keep writing .. you're doing a great job :D

[tmasse]

I like it because it is clearly intended to be song lyrics and i am a very musical person

[ksscampos]

Tender write.. i felt my nerves responding to each line i read. Thanks for sharing

[lily pennvellyn]

very deep and dark and very beautiful, I like that, though I do think it should be renamed because firstly the name doesn't really work for the poem and secondly I fear that the name may always bring terrible memories of frozen O.o

[Sophy Freebirds]

Its lyrics i guess.I liked the dark concept of poem. The ending was chilling
I especially liked the line where you wrote he must achieve desire to get her. And yes desire is the cause of all suffering. Your power of telling tales through poem is good. Its a rare trait. Flaunt it. Keep writing ;)

~Sophy