Persuasive essay on virtual reality

This was a short persuasive essay that I wrote for my junior English class. It detail the important aspects on why I believe virtual reality is the future.

Author's Note

I am a current junior in high school. I'm posting my essays here as story's solely to keep them in a place I can link to on the internet. Most of my essays aren't very interesting, but if you would like to offer any advice on my writing that would always be welcome! The essay is an attached word document where the picture is located. Thanks for your input!