Upon a Comment

Upon a Comment

A Poem by Rodrick Franklin McLaren
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Young writer in posting mail

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Romonx Rocks      on: Linux Ubuntu
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Ah... thank you. Please, post again.





The intermittent chair I recline, repose. Then compose, eloquence in throws.
Ah. I bet your skin. just gleam. Radiant and fine light, by candle calm. Like cream...
I dream, upon the comfort, of my skin.
Give it a manly... scratch.
An pat, my cat. Shiva.
Burmese... My, Goddess of War.
Whom in my loneliness. Just adore, her sleeping...



Inspiration arrived.





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© 2010 Rodrick Franklin McLaren


Author's Note

Rodrick Franklin McLaren
Sophi so sophisticated

Admired & Enjoyed. In Posting...

Past Desktop shared from Romonx Computer Lab.

This Hillbilly Poet. ;)

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very classy feel to it! sensational!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The fruits of the inspiration are sublime. I am drawn into empathy, and each re-reading is more satisfying to the poet within.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow...inspiring,different.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 14, 2010
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Rodrick Franklin McLaren
Rodrick Franklin McLaren

Quesnel, North, Canada



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Romon... in Review I write thriller fiction action/adventure, that are at times. Possibly ethical and demand... some spiritual introspection. From the Deep Dark & Primal, I write in seclusion. In a.. more..

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