Why I Rememer You, Joshua

This is a reworked Poem from my favorite Original Collection, Living Between. I Actually very happy with the way it turned out and even though usually i don't included the real names of people in the titles or works themselves but what are the chances tha

The Sun will soon come to that place in the high

Were it was at nearly this time once before

Life was many things

including without your grace.

Found among the heavy, hearty, squaking, scolding droning

were truthes,

etched in songs

Pointedly, and preciously pleasing to the ears.

They were songs close to a heart soft,

soon to e hardened under the illusion of a perfect world.

 

I came to know your voice

Then I understood your eyes,

And the Paradigm

Im left to recall what time has not claimed

Only very few remain

Light from your eyes

The hush of your midnight speech

Im left alone

To rememer a vague dream.

 

 

Author's Note

so im in a rush to go out with my roommate and his fam, if there are any typos sorry i'll e ack to fix and post more latter. I welcome all reviews.

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

I love it!

[Ben]

This is very good!