Why I Remember You, Zane

The Second of the Why I remember you series

Ha! Ha! Ha!

all i hear,

My mind so empty of the fruits once here

amored to impotency

mesmerised mute,

naked, helpless in my perfect nude

so supple and plush each part of me,

Open to the dream.

I partook the creed,

love you my law, all I need.

 

Lacerated, Vivesected

Torn THe F**k OPEN!

my sole token

of that jaded conncetion

underwhich i maintained our connection,

entranced by the dance of of topaz flames

Lapis lazul rain;

Sardonyx hued blooms destract me

of Obsidian Chains

 

Loose and ignorant

from my stolen remaining glory

Blind

to the shadow lumming over our story.

That Relationship, your relationship.

My relationship, Our Relationship.

 

Promises

I could no longer keep

For I was Kept, In deep

Though given to thee, as no one before

Seeing In you God,

Nay, Gods Abound

I exposed my breast

called you to rest and was Happily Ganymede,

For the rape of my beauty.

 

Loving you the law,

lovingyou my creed

I shall never forget you...

So...Please my love...Remember me.

Reviews

[Shanny Rowanhill]

I really really like it! I don't know what it's about but there was something that just made sense to me. It's got a great word flow as well :) Keep it up