Lets go see

Diving into the inevitable...

There is an overlay --- in the overlap

quick jump in --- lets go see

I believe that I --- can swim The Tides

lest to say--- a round-about way

to see though to the through and through.

All a jumble --- about to crumble

the some --- to only grumble

while others--- stumble

get lost --- along the way

as the void screams --- sink or swim...

Ah --- but there is an overlay in the overlap

a way-- to bridge the decay --- they say

said --- who said who

what where or why

Maybe the owl --- on a midnight prowl

through dreams --- stepping lightly

over things --- unlikely

all those things --- that stand in your way

Listen to that voice, yearning to stay a float

The void nothing ---ponders nothing

only reacts --- stalls, the next play

In the chaos --- of the confused " pause

before --- diving in ---ya man

sink or swim

Dive off the Bridge

with Faith --- into the River

there is the way -- by the ways

leave the illusion

behind

there is an overlay in the overlap

a way to bridge the decay they say

Who are they?

A lesson to learn on any other day

Reviews

[Helena]

A unique and interesting write Rory. Many layers of thought penned admirably.....many thoughts going through my head as well. "there is an overlay in the overlap'.....good phrase!

Kind regards,

Helena

[Rene Velez]

Love the write and it's wordplay, wonderful poem Rory glad I stopped by.

[A. Amos]

Maybe the owl --- on a midnight prowl
through dreams --- stepping lightly
over things --- unlikely
all those things --- that stand in your way
Listen to that voice, yearning to stay a float

Brilliant writting and your poetry stylish. Bravo