Sara's Song

A Beautiful Stranger Sang Souls Serenity

Souls Surrender











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I sat upon a moonlight ripple
that glide
refractions along
its very edge
the maiden supple recovered
the star
that dance her finger tip
sung sweetly
the light of her lyric wet
falling crescendo
into endless thrall an sail
ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song

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Sang to Moonlight & Wave Searching
Spirit Themes...

Author's Note

her inspiration was divine

Reviews

[Augustus]

Magical, mystical write...It transported me from this world into one where fancy reigns supreme... Very very elegantly penned indeed! The beginning is so wonderfully mesmerizing! "I sat upon a moonlight ripple".... Wow! You weave magic through words...
"ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song"
....Astonishingly brilliant...fantastic flow...like a flowing river, like a melodious song...
Enchanting write!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very nice - wuite Divine. Reminds me of both a mermaid and a siren. Nicely spun. Great choice of music too!
Love and Light,
SiddARTha

[Middling]

very good.

[Sean Allen]

"... and God saw that it was not good for man to be alone."
It's enough to make believers out of us. Believers in Sarah, that is.

[thoughts of jade]

its simply beautiful, almost magical

[deeps]

I think this is wonderful, so beuatiful