Forgotten Promise

Destinies Children From review Inspiration May 3 2010

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Forgotten Promise
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The void beckon, receive its review... done
ah so I'll see, so few. You lose. Holding
In the glory, said. End of days. For a fiend.
A fickle friend finding, blood red chimes.

Do you see, what stands in thy way. Pretender.
Sender of lies, deceit repeats slanders kind.
As I Am the beginning, spinner of trial. Mine
the wheel I grind and... the stars, that shine.

Ebb and Flow... All creation, will go.

The Aeriel way, a Golden Road. Beyond, splendor
this mystic path unfold. Within this hand. Smolder
rack ruin demise, that. I might rise, Smite Angels?
puffed up with self same gloat. Will void, promote!

Sew distension, within multitudes midst. To beguile,
thy pledge whilst I, engender. Clarions Call. Avenge...

Abladonna sigh, yet another to smother. Feathers.

Will it ever end? This war. Where wings will whither,
in untold Heavens Breath. Ethereal webs, contest.
To transcend and dive Between, wheels. Dream...
Unwind the thread, find the pretender. This sender.

Above and Beyond travel, unravel. Strands of light.
Deliver, reasonings decree. This last Angels, trust.
Rescind... or Die! mortal last thousand deathless sins.
Behind. One Hundred forty-four thousand. Others.

These portents, forced down.
Willingly forgotten Promises. kept dormant, and only.
Abhorrent destruction, hence.
Abandoned abodes, on high. Cosmic stardust crust.
Crystalline tablets crack and crumble. Paradines rust..
The very convocation offend, the just decree. For I Avenger.
The lever, suffer. With out rage, go forth.
Armed, for further trial...
 
A hated, an loathsome task. Strikes hate into my heart. Instant, burnt remorse. As would I, then fail? That would say, thus far no further. Angel pride. Fruit rotten, so far from the tree that bleed. Desolation Angels, not heed. Their Masters, warning?
Light, they shy. An so, seven horsemen ride.
Now, past tense destroyed. Worthless, and turn.
To self serving fancy... My sisters. Abladonna, wept. Eternity.
All was broken,
To have, snuffed out. Void, nothing heart.
For one final, Angel. While she, her given task. At end...
  .
Was, to mark. The now. Beginnings blend.

      ------Her statue crumble------

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I'm The Last Prophet

    A Poem by Kit Kat

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Author's Note

This was inspired in review of
I'm The Last Prophet
A Poem by Kit Kat
With whom I find a Poetess of endless Inspiration...

As it remind me of my novel I wrote while at her sight
I'm finding this quite a lot and awesome as poetry at times had to come by
do you think this is a valid thing to do well reviewing. Mayhap, check her site, to be
sure is not plagiarism. As this would be a definite wrong.

How do you find the flow and do the words suit?

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Blam blam

[Rossen]

An so, Seven Horsemen Ride!.... Coolest line ever!


They will need to pick up some tasty pheasant.
O look down there!

[pheasant]

3 ghostly reviews... missing with empty hues
What news do we refuse to use?
What clues this stews within and glues
Pointed pathways placate palace pallets
While the jointed anointed open unspoken times