Little old me

thoughts

I have often thought to myself What do I matter?

Billions of little creatures make up me

an uncountable amount of people make up the earth

earth is just a planet in a solar system in a galaxy and so forth and so on

and then i thought, I dont matter

I am just something of something of something ext

so they threw relegion at me

well god cares about every sparrow that hits the ground

well im sure he does but still

what do i matter

Then I lost the will to live to thrive as the person that is me

Drugs alcohol sex you name it i did it

then those events those choices led up to a knife to my wrist

I slit it as the blod flowed i didnt care i didnt matter

Then I felt someone picking me up

no it wasnt god or an angel or a f*****g alien

it was him the one i had came to love

 

In my opinion we all matter

becuase i didnt die that day

i found out a month later i was 3 months pregnant

my duaghter has been more of a blessing to me

and everyone i know then i could ever imagine.

becuase i had her when i did

my mom was able to enjoy having a grandbaby before she passed this last january

now i ask you did that matter

 

Author's Note

just thoughts no grammer structure

Reviews

[Enigma]

Beautiful thoughts.The way the poem advances from feeling worthless to the point where you realize that 'you DO matter', it's all very realistic and makes the readeer to think about her/his own life.I say, it's a beautiful poem.I enjoyed reading ir.The first verse cearted a kind of sad and helpless mood, but the second verse wiped it all away.It's all very hopeful and encouraging.
GREAT JOB!!!...and keep writing.
^_^

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

i like the thought process within this poem. how it pulses with a poetic magic. another great write. wonderful.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Good thoughts I appreciate your percpective..