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Yes its me again

I went outside to day to smoke a cigeratte why my duaghter played

everyone around me was celebrating 4/20 I was sitting smoking a ciggeratte alone

As I glanced around my courtyard I could see that atleast 3 apartments were haveing celbrations

Luaghing Throwing Footballs Dancing Just having a danm good time

While I sat there with my cigeratte alone

I felt like such an idiot such an outcast such a loser

I started to remember when I was the life of the party

Then as I walked back with my duaghter following behind picking flowers

I started to feel sick I was so mad at myself about not apreciating this wonderful gift

This ray of sunshine whos whole world centers around me

I picked her up and gave her a kiss

Aww your so sweet i love you mommy she said

I love you too Annie i responded and held her hand as we stepped back into our cave

Reviews

[Timothy]

On 4/20 I was sitting on my computer programming.
It made me feel so nerdy.
And I liked it.

On a more serious note, it's wonderful to hear about such a simple and beautiful moment between you and Anastasia :).

[RHEA CROSLEY]

very much from the heart and yes you have a greater gift then all the parties in the world.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

a very great poem. i love how you show how your life changed after your daughter came into the world. i love the poem. it seems as if you show this person as the kind of person that has very many lists of responsibilities now that she's older. great poem again.